Thread:PeaVZ108/@comment-8138569-20180524181754/@comment-30384301-20181017010717

Chilly Bean BAM! wrote: PeaVZ108 wrote: Chilly Bean BAM! wrote: PeaVZ108 wrote: Honestly, I don't think reviving Giovanni is a great idea. There's basically almost nothing we know about that villain! Okay, here's some backstory: He was a hero in his former life, but after getting tired of protecting cilivans of his hometown, he decided to stop and become a villain. Not too long afterwards, he hired Corolla Amethyst to be one of his minions. The two created their base where they relaxed. That's too bland and short. Not to mention, unoriginal. His backstory is too similar to that of Jacqueline's, and it gives more questions than answers.

And we have yet to know more about Giovanni's personality, hometown, species, etc. I'm sorry but this is the only thing I can come up with.

Actually, you can come up with a better one.

Giovanni's a human.

His hometown... You choose, too.

Also, his personality: He's often calm, but can get serious at points.

Some character development after he may get revived (Is this bland?): After possible revival, Giovanni will plan on becoming a mad scientist so that he can create his own minions. I think it's better if Giovanni is dead for good. I can't help you with coming up with info for your characters anyway, they are YOUR charcaters after all.

It doesn't matter if a character who has been revived gets development, it's still character development. The type of character development determines how bland it is.

I don't think Giovanni becoming a mad scientist is such a good idea. What kind of a villain is Giovanni anyway in his debut? A superpowered human? An elemental ninja? A cosmic being? Or...?