Thread:Redfork2000/@comment-30384301-20190305154237/@comment-26888167-20190331034520

It's important to have, yes, but in this particular case that description just contributed to the confusing wording. I do believe visual descriptions should be reserved to set the scene, or to describe how a character looks. Visual descriptions of objects is good, specially if it's something meaningful. I believe the main problem here wasn't the description, but rather how everything was worded. That made the description fo the orb losing its color stand out way more than it should have. The emphasis should've been on the fact that nothing happened as a result of the destruction of the orb, but the way it was worded made it sound like the loss of color was the main point, probably one of the things that made if more confusing. As most writing problems, the problem with the paragraph wasn't the content, but rather  the execution.