Thread:JeloElducal/@comment-30384301-20181009131149/@comment-30384301-20181012151253

JeloElducal wrote: PeaVZ108 wrote: What's going to happen in your next edit anyway? In terms of how the story will go. I'm gonna remove all filler and rearrange events in the story.

The story will end in an uncontrollable party that Jelo will try hard to stop. So it ends just like that? I thought you should probably end it by having Jelo do something to solve that problem.