Thread:JeloElducal/@comment-8138569-20180129060924/@comment-8138569-20180130232352

CreeperDNA wrote: No personality = hard to use.

Doesn't seem to stop 99% of this wikia's characters.

Tessa - A somewhat easygoing gal. She's also mostly intelligent as well.

That's not a personality. That's a loose framework for a personality, and the exact same thing you used to describe Jaiden. Pro tip: the number one thing to avoid is a one-sentence personality. If your character's personality can be described in a single sentence, like that, it's not a good character. Notice how Npegear, my personal favorite, has a complex personality that makes her more than a 2D cut-out. Ask yourself these questions:


 * What do they look like?
 * What are their motives?
 * What would they do in any given situation?
 * How would they act casually?
 * How would you act if you were them?
 * What is their mental state?
 * Why are they in The Rooms?
 * If you could describe them in one setence what would it be? (This may seem redundant but stay with me here)
 * Elaborate on each point in order to hopefully turn the sentence into a paragraph.
 * Put all of these points together and you've got yourself a character.

There are too much questions here.

You know what, fine! Let me get them all up soon.