Thread:Redfork2000/@comment-30384301-20180707030921/@comment-30384301-20180924141116

It's alright, I just did all that by planning ahead, to see what your thoughts of the story idea are before executing the story itself. I want this story to be as great as the prequel or perhaps even greater, by going about a completely different approach.

About the maze, the only difference is that there won't be any hypnotisms, and the gang members will be trapped instead. Besides, not all illusions are going to be manipulative of emotions, for example Red Fork will be lured by illusions of food, triggering his appetite which will lead to his own trap.

Didn't Alice fall for Discord's illusions once? Well, I'm not sure how Alice is intelligent in other areas besides science, but it might work. Besides, it might work considering that Alice can attempt using her weapons on "Starcade" when the latter threatens to kill her imprisoned friends. I initially thought Blue Ocean would be a better choice since he and Starcade possibly have a stronger friendship than Alice and Starcade.

So I guess it will work better in the later part of the story when the other gang members get freed after Starcade wins against Olympus in an arcade game and regains her title. I might plan only for Kyoji and Alice to fight against Dark Starcade while Starcade and Olympus are fighting each other in another dimension. I think it'll work if the rest of the gang gets freed only when Starcade is about to destroy Olympus' castle, maze and city with the power of the Champion's Cup.

By the way, what do you think of the overall plot/idea of the story? There's evident changes, since I felt the previous one isn't as good as this slightly altered one.