Thread:JeloElducal/@comment-30384301-20181114140820/@comment-30384301-20181117063842

Chilly Bean BAM! wrote: *sigh* Here's some character development.

I think it's because you've seen one of my comments in Fork's blog. But anyway...
 * Kernely's childish and she also plays the violin.
 * Blovy knows how to play basketball with her friends (No, not the other 5. Unnamed friends.).
 * Pealy cares for Kernely more than the others.
 * Richard prefers classical music over other music.
 * Samantha frequently adds the word "like" to her speech.

I explained what character development is to you once, and I'll do it again. Character development happens to a character when he or she gets more depth and personality through interactions and events that he or she is involved in. It should be smooth, and not feel like it comes out of nowhere. These changes you show me were never mentioned nor foreshadowed in any of your stories. Anyway, let me give some of my comments for what you call character development:


 * Why would Kernely's development go from Kernely being the princess of Foodland to Kernely being a childish character? Also, has Kernely ever played the violin before?


 * Let me guess, upcoming new characters?


 * I think you told that to me before. That would work, maybe.


 * That is not character development.


 * Again, not character development. That'll make Samantha feel like a ripoff of Leni Loud. Yes, I've viewed Leni's page before, and I viewed it again for confirmation.

There's so many possible ideas for character development you can come up with. It's not hard to think of a way a character can be developed, in fact you can gain inspiration from sources like TV shows, movies, stories and more. Habits, preferences, favorite things and activities, which is mostly what you stated as character development, are not examples of character development.

Speaking of character development, I have a story idea for HoEC Season 4 where I can help develop one of your characters, Corolla. Since I've already provided her backstory, I have been thinking of a short story idea for HoEC about Corolla and Amelia Amethyst. It'll make Corolla stand out more as a better character than she is in The Winter Ring. I can ask Fork about what he thinks, provided that you will allow me to co-own Richard and the other five main characters, as well as Corolla.