Thread:PeaVZ108/@comment-8138569-20180524181754/@comment-30384301-20190226143334

It's better than before, if I do say so myself.

Don't you have a story idea where Drillbit and his team would trick Jewel into creating a superpowered hero? If so, I have an idea to make this interesting. Why don't that superpowered hero be Melody?

Melody can be kidnapped by Jewel or anyone from Drillbit's team (up to you), before being brought to Jewel's lab where she would gain superpowers. Then that's when the rest of the story will take place, only difference is that Re-Peat Boss will no longer have to be involved.

But I think it would be a good idea to scrap the idea of having Melody join the gang. Remember, with more members of the gang, the easier it is for them to deal with villains, and the less challenging the villains will be in the future. Villains who don't provide much of a challenge tend to be less interesting than villains who do.