Thread:Redfork2000/@comment-30384301-20180925062435/@comment-26888167-20181222021859

Got it. By the way, I think Emily Green could play a big role here. Since Red Ruby is being hostile to Emily as of now, how about a scene where Red Ruby says something mean to Emily? Since she's still insecure and sensitive, the leaders of the gang would get angry at Red for hurting Emily's feelings.

Furthermore, I'd like near the end of the story, for there to be a scene where Red Ruby is in real danger, and Emily Green being who helps him out. The idea is that this story could also build up some character development for improving the relationship between Emily Green and Red Ruby.