Thread:PeaVZ108/@comment-27480112-20190325134304/@comment-26888167-20190509135104

When?

Your writing skills? Well, you've improved. You've been able to make good stories. On what I'd recommend you to improve is:

-Keeping stories interesting: Sometimes you make a bad choice in a story that slows down the plot or makes it turn boring. It's ok to have slower moments in the plot. In fact, it's required that not everything is fast paced and action, as that would get boring to. but you need to make sure the slower parts of the plot are interesting to. Use comedy, use character interactions, or perhaps reveal something about the plot or your characters, so it doesn't feel like we're just taking an unnecessary slowdown.

-Consistent Editing: Sometimes you start a story, but then go days without editing it. That only kills the interest for the story and makes it harder to continue. I'm not saying you should write your entire story in one day, or that you have to continously edit all day long, but you should make an effort to focus on your story and not let them stay stuck because you didn't edit them. For example, when I come here, the first thing I do is check all my currently running stories, to see if it's my turn to edit any of them. This problem has happened before, and I really recommend you work on it, since it slows the pace and slowly kills the interest for stories when the editing takes so long to happen.