Thread:CITRONtanker/@comment-27480112-20171027123048/@comment-27101994-20171029232220

JeloElducal wrote: Fairy27 wrote: First, yup, improve it while you can. Second, forget scrapping Lilliana. Then again it was likely that I'd use her regardless since I have to follow the IaLR Lillie and it doesn't fit for what I want. Maybe I'd use Gladion, but nah, I can only cope up with one edgy character, kinds of episodes combined. I already have one edgy character. What, what happened to Lilliana? Both her and Lillie have similar roles, but I've spiced up Lilliana's role, and I was considering switching to Lillie but there were more disadvantages than advanatges for her, plus you got control of her.

Now, it's been changed, even though it was like this before. Solstice the Cosmog finds Lilliana stranded, and teleports her away, not knowing that some Cosmosses and Frostbolt Shooters (Yes, I've changed that from one Frostbolt Shooter to multiple) were chasing both of them in the process. It decided to bond with her, wanting to protect her. Turns out, if the secret hidden under her straw hat is revealed, something bad will awaken. It doesn't want that to happen.

Although that will be months ago in the IaLR timeline. In the present, they accidentally bump to Moon and the rest.

Also, most of this will become a slice of life type of story; I may not be able to concentrate multiple plots but you know what? I kind of decided to switch it to what I originally plannned to avoid this. And no arcs available. I feel like all three of my Outside the Rooms mains will get development soon.