Review:Dream Seize

Plot
Dr. Creep: *grabs Galaximus* It's always cute when she sleeps...

Emphasis on the Creep part.

Dream Creep: Just reviewing stuff I already know, such as this book about Algebra!

I mean

Algebra is like Year 6 stuff

Idk what that is in America but it's like 10-11 year olds here

Anyway Algebra isn't hard

Dream Creep: I'd known that you'd be bored eventually, so a couple of hours before you declared to me your boredom, I baked some brownies that have sleeping depressants in them and gave them to your generals. You know what that means, right?

That you have no attacking as you and all of your generals are sleeping and literally anyone could break in without your knowledge?

When Galaximus starts exploring, she sees Bendy raiding her food supply Case in point.

Dream Galaximus: I should get into his dream! I should stop narrating everything I'm about to do!

Dream Galaximus: Unfortunately, you may be right. The urge to be evil is- gone!

DUN DUN DUN

I'm trying to be dramatic because that's the end. Rustbolt said it was unfinished but this is just ridiculous. 1.2/3

Grammar
Grammar was fine. What's off is the characters feeling the need to describe everything they do. 2/3

Originality
Literally that one Spongebob episode. I couldn't say where he was going with this because, like I said, it's unfinished. 0/3

Verdict
I can't really give a fair score because it's unfinished but as it is now:

3.5/10 - Completely Unfin