Thread:PeaVZ108/@comment-27480112-20190325134304/@comment-26888167-20190509140705

They're ok, though frankly I do think you should give them some more character development. I mean, they're not as bland as Chilly's characters. You do give them their distinct personalities. I specially like how you play Star. The lines you give her really sound like what she'd say.

However, you could imrpove on character development. Most of the time your characters don't grow, and by the end of the story your characters are exactly the same people they were before the story. A new focus you could try is to focus less on the main villain or on the big event, and instead give your characters a bit more focus. How about storylines based on your main characters? I know that's kind of what the yandere Rosewell story was going to be like, but you should try to give all your characters some development.

I'd say that you should try and develop characters like Jelo, CypherDen, Rebecca, Kaitlynn, and other characters you use the most in stories.

Jaiden's development in recent stories comes mostly from Blaiden interactions and her interactions with the other elemental ninjas, but if we could make a good Jaidenstyle episode that should help.

Jelo I think should be given a bit more personality, since when with the gang, he doesn't feel too unique. Most members of the gang has a few character traits that make them really stand out, such as Red Fork's self-confidence and leadership, Lemon Glass's kind but also a bit fearful nature, Tommy's fun-loving and innocent behavior, Boom & Electra's tendency to be a bit rude and sometimes roast others, Alice's more analytical and cautious approach, everyone has something that makes them stand out.

I'll admit Jelo does stand out when we see him animating, but when out on missions, he doesn't stand out much. Most of his lines when fighting villains nowadays is just saying something at the villains and slashing them with a sword.

CypherDen and Rebecca could use a bit more of a spotlight as well. You see, the trick is to focus on individual characters instead of the gang as a whole. Think of how you can develop each character separately, and how you can make them stand out in a story. Every character should have a role that only they can play. For example, notice how Red Fork plays the leadership role. I've had other characters play leadership roles too, such as Blue Ocean, Twilight or Blast, but none of them play the leader role the same way Red Fork does. Same for every other character. You need to make them unique in their own ways.

Kaitlynn has a well defined personality, but could use a few more appearances in stories to establish that. You see, you have a very large cast as well, so you need to make sure to give all your characters the attention they need to develop themselves. You're definitely ahead of Chilly in this regard, but you could still improve a bit further.