Thread:JeloElducal/@comment-26888167-20180927161106/@comment-27480112-20180929142139

Redfork2000 wrote: CaptainRustbolt21 wrote: So, I thought up of a random story idea. It goes a little something like this:

Mr. Red busts into Dr. Zack's lair, who makes an offer to join forces, promising to bring down the Locked Room Gang in exchange to be given the entire continent of the United States. Dr. Zack agrees and they were able to capture Jelo Elducal, holding him hostage and demanding the Locked Room Gang to surrender to them. Alan Robertson, after intercepting the broadcast, decides to invoke Priority Heroism (where if the Locked Room Gang or any other major superhero organization has been compromised) and assembles Task Force V, who assigns them to rescue Jelo and take down Mr. Red & Dr. Zach's forces. 1 - Busts into the lair? That's not an easy task. Before getting anywhere close Dr. Zack himself, he'd have to reveal his intentions, or else he'd be confronted by the entire team. We're talking four superpowered teens, a magical flower with four minions, a pirate piranha with an army of piranhas, a cowboy inkling, a pony-inkling hybrid, and possibly, even Dr. Zack's nieces.

2 - United States is a country, not a continent. The name of the continent is America.

3 - Holding Jelo hostage in theory would be a good idea, but it's actually much more useful to capture the more powerful members of the gang, since they're the ones who will give the two villains the most trouble. Red Fork, for example, can easily take out Splash, Bark, Breeze and Tempo on his own.

Wait, so the gang won't be who defeats the villains at the end?

I think it's supposed to be a twist on the formula.