Talk:JJR:Nitro Mania/@comment-28716546-20180404104400

Ok. For your first review, I guess it was good. The entire first section was just listing random facts about the story that have no relevance anywhere, nor are funny (besides the Jelo toast part, that was pretty good) or a review.

The second section was a very good review part, and I commend you for that.

When I get around to reviewing this story, I wait to see how my score compares to yours.