Thread:Redfork2000/@comment-30384301-20190109034934/@comment-26888167-20190110011252

A few things:

1 - I'm not sure if this will work like it did in Nitro Mania. The Retro Rebels put up a good fight against the gang back then, but that was season 1. Now the gang is much more powerful. It the Nitro Maniacs are around the same power level of the Retro Rebels, the gang will mop the floor with them. Don't forget how powerful the gang ahs become since Season 1.

2 - Blue Ocean will not be happy with Test Subject Blue for destroying a videogame project. It will really touch him since he knows what it's like to be a frustrated videogame developer, so don't expect Blue Ocean to react nicely to the news that Test Subject Blue destroyed Cuboy's videogame project. Whatever the circumstances were, Blue Ocean will not take that lightly. He won't say anything about Starcade rejecting it for being past the deadline, since rules are rules and all, but he'll immediately jump when he hears about Test Subject Blue's aggressive behavior. This isn't an issue with the story, but I'm just warning you so it doesn't surprise you when Blue Ocean looks upset at Test Subject Blue for his behavior.

3 - This sounds like a solo story, since only your characters are the ones that actually do anything meaningful in the story. All my characters are just limited to being side characters who just fight, and then get beaten up by Super Cuboy. Notice how even in my stories, I always give at least some of your characters something meaningful to do in the story. Even in Red Flu, you could say Bonk Choy, Green Shadow and Starcade played a bigger role than some of my own characters. I'm not saying it's bad for your characters to be the focus. Of course not. But at least give some of my characters something meaningful to do in this story besides fighting the Nitro Maniacs, being the passive audience for Cuboy's backstory, and get beaten up by him.