Thread:PeaVZ108/@comment-8138569-20180524181754/@comment-30384301-20190226142309

Yeah, I agree with Fork. There's a lot of holes to this, but I think it's still your best attempt for a story plot to me so far.

You should start having your own ideas and opinions on how your characters should be like. Just because we give advice to how you should improve or ideas that will make your characters and stories work, it doesn't mean that you have to accept it for the sake of making us happy. Remember that we don't know your characters as much as you do, so if you rely too much on us for help to deciding how your characters should be like, they may end up in a way you don't want them to be. Our ideas on your characters and how you want to perceive your characters as may sometimes conflict, so it is not necessarily a good idea to just copy and paste our ideas for your characters sometimes.

The reason why I willingly gave backstories for your characters is because I want to help your characters stand out as much as possible. Sure, you can use them but they're mostly an idea I have for your characters, since you don't really have any for them. I'm just saying, try not to agree to our ideas for the sake of making us happy, as our ideas may eventually make you unhappy due to your characters not turning out the way you want them to be. Which is another reason why your characters aren't as memorable as others as of now.