User blog:ItzXenos/Draft I guess?

This is a first-draft for the start of Ancients Awakened. Feel free to say your thoughts.

''Ancient Greece. The sky has grown dark, red lightning flashes through the sky. The camera passes through ruined buildings and corpses. In the distance, as the lightning flashes, the silhouette of a huge creature can be seen along with shrill roars. White lightning bolts flash through the sky alongside the red lightning.''

''King of the Olympians, Zeus, darts through the sky hurling lightning bolts down towards the ground, as 5 massive serpentine heads coil through the sky towards the God. Each serpentine head is equipped with large curved horns, and green scales. As the two figures ascend through the sky, each of the creature's heads firing beams of red electricity, Zeus turns to face his ancient enemy, it's massive wings parting the sky around it before quickly sealing up''


 * Zeus: Why don't we bring this fight down to Earth, Typhon!

''Like a lightning bolt, Zeus accelerates towards Typhon, a white aura of electricity charging up around him as he slams into Typhon's chest with all his weight, pushing the great dragon towards the earth. Typhon's heads cry out in rage as the two descend through the atmosphere, heating up as they fall.''

''The two crash into the earth, a shockwaves rips through the ruins of Greece, a shockwave which flattened everything in a kilometer area. As the smoke slowly clears, each of Typhon's heads emerged from the rubble. The middle head looks around, surveying the ruins for Zeus. The left head emerged slightly slower than the others, quite dazed and disoriented from the drop. The middle one roars, getting the rest of the head's attention, warning them to watch out for Zeus. The middle right head nervously eyes the surrounding, looking up in worry. The middle head eyes the sky, before through the flashes, notices a huge object in the sky. The middle head roars at the others to focus on this incoming object. Through the clouds and the lighting, floats Zeus, carrying an entire mountain upon his shoulders.''


 * Zeus: ARRRRGGGHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!

''Zeus hurls the mountain. Typhon's middle head freaks out, ordering the others to prepare for flight, but it was too late. The mountain slammed down upon the dragon, creating an even greater shockwave of dust.''

Zeus lands, breathing heavily and covered in wounds.


 * Zeus: Finally, he's dead. Must find the others.

''Zeus weakly takes off to look for the other Olympians, fallen in the conflict against Typhon. As the camera pins to the now dormant volcano, Typhon's body remains dormant, but a single red eye flickers open.''