Thread:JeloElducal/@comment-26888167-20181018143518/@comment-26888167-20181022043136

Giovanni's backstory needs some polishing, due to the fact of Giovanni becoming more powerful than Glossaryck. (Glossaryck is pretty much invincible unless you burn the magic book he comes with). Also, knowing Glossaryck, he'd probably confuse Giovanni intentionally, making it almost impossible for him to learn enough to become that powerful.

I say Giovanni should steal the book. Glossaryck will then help him since he always helps whoever owns the book. (He even once "helped" Ludo when Ludo stole the book). However, Glossaryck won't try to stop Giovanni. After all, he "owns" the book.

I love Corolla's backstory though! Good job on that one.