Thread:JeloElducal/@comment-30384301-20180809125956/@comment-31727837-20180812191208

CaptainRustbolt21 wrote: Simulation ERROR, Jelo. I’ve also made some modifications to the plot:


 * Dr. Creep was practicing proposing for Sheila to be his girlfriend (using HIM as his practicing dummy). Eventually, HIM would get tired of the ordeal and plans on telling Galaximus that Dr. Creep is falling in love with her, but before he can do so, Mr. Red, through an intercom, reports everyone to his Computer Room.


 * Mr. Red introduces the Galactic Army his finalized Simulation Room, where players of the Simulation can play games, combat practices and create their own holonovels. Using this to his advantage, Dr. Creep downloads Romance Academy 7 (where the Giffany trojan resides in) and uses it to practice proposing for Galaximus.


 * Eventually, Galaximus learns that Dr. Creep is in love with her (from an anonymous tip from HIM) and is overjoyed by this, and asks Mr. Red to retrieve Dr. Creep from the Simulation Room so she can ask him out on a date. At the same time, however, Dr. Creep admits to Giffany that he isn't truly in love with her and is only using her as a practice dummy so he can ask Galaximus out. Enraged, Giffany traps Creep in the Simulation and sets it so if Mr. Red attempts to restart the software, it would cause the systems to overload and meltdown, killing whoever is in the Simulation in the process.


 * Left with little choice, Mr. Red and Galaximus enters the Simulation, where they must go through different games to confront Giffany and rescue Dr. Creep. On the way, they manage to recruit different characters from the games (in order: PvZ game, they recruit Crazy Dave, in the Kirby game, the Jambastion Mages, and in the Portal game, Chell). Meanwhile, within the Matrix, Giffany becomes increasingly frustrated that the group keep defeating the enchanced characters she keeps throwing at them. Dr. Creep then decides to have small talk with Giffany before asking if she really loved him, then why is she doing this. This caught her off-guard and, before she can answer, the mysterious voice in her head tells her to ignore the question and continue attempts to stall the group, in which Giffany was forced to say that she can’t answer that question.


 * Mr. Red, Galaximus, and Dark Jaiden all go to confront Giffany, who has made her way to the fortress' main power generator, planning on shutting it down to leave the Galactic Army vulnerable to any attacks from enemy militaries. However, in a twist, Mr. Red knew the possibility of a self-conscious AI ambushing the systems, so he encrypted the access code for the power generator. In return, she summoned the Locked Room Gang (simulation characters) to stall the team while she attempts the decrypt the access code.


 * Dr. Creep, knowing that he needs to do something to stop Giffany from shutting down the power, he gave Giffany a heart-warming speech to her about their differences, wishes for each other to move on, and if Giffany truly cares for Creep, then she'll stop her plans. Touched by this, Giffany gives in, stops herself from decrypting the access code of the Power Generator of the fortress and thanks Creep for helping her "overcome her secret codes." Then, the mysterious voice comes into her mind once again, threatening to delete her if she doesn’t get the job done. However, Giffany refuses and proceeds to delete herself. Thus, allowing the whole team to safely leave the Simulation Room.

Made some modifications to the plot of this. Nothing too drastic...
 * Mr. Red plans to shut down the whole Simulation Room out of fear that another Trojan AI will come out of the internet and attack their servers. Meanwhile, Dr. Creep asks Galaximus out for a date and she gleefully accepts. And where and how will this date take place? Why, cause mass destruction to the city of Echo Creek together!