Thread:PeaVZ108/@comment-8138569-20180524181754/@comment-30384301-20190224024315

What's with you and human-gemstone characters lately? At this rate, I can have a similar backstory where several characters like Melody gets turned into human-gemstones by the same character. And no, that won't be Amelia's doing.

This new plot sounds interesting. This is by far one of your best ones so far, so A for effort. However, it still has its flaws.

I'm not sure why Melody would want to trick Corolla if she won't gain anything out of it. And by looking at the plot, I think it would make sense if Melody and Re-Peat Boss worked together in order to make this happen. The thing is, there still should be a reason on why Melody wants to be a part of this in the first place.

So, Melody's going to have poison powers? Got it.

Well, I'd be glad to help think of a backstory for Melody Emerald, but that'll take time.