Thread:Redfork2000/@comment-30384301-20190504061426/@comment-26888167-20190517153452

True. Well, so far the most important surprises have worked pretty well. The best one by far has been the one that revealed that Shogo wasn't actually evil, but was only being controlled by the Warlord.

What I meant mostly were sections that I could do on my own, like the ones where Dark Shadow, Black Gem, Iron heart and Windy Sails appeared. Those sections were written quickly and therefore never slowed down the story. I think we can make more progress is we each have a few solo sections, so for example when you come, you can focus on editing a complete section, and when you're not around I can focus on editing my own sections. I think the story might move faster that way. For example, the Boom & Electra vs Dark Starcade section would only count as a solo section if I co-owned Dark Starcade during that battle, which I imagine won't be the case.