Thread:Redfork2000/@comment-8138569-20180831141006/@comment-8138569-20181215125243

Redfork2000 wrote: Chilly Bean BAM! wrote: Redfork2000 wrote: Chilly Bean BAM! wrote: Redfork2000 wrote: Chilly Bean BAM! wrote: Redfork2000 wrote: Nope. Okay, then what is the perfect time to introduce Fire Monarch? When he doesn't sound like a copy of Scorch. Fire Monarch's not exactly a copy of Scorch - she can summon butterflies and deal fiery blows with her fists. She can fly, too. Let's be honest here: I'm not interested in any new characters of yours until you develop the ones you already have. Give yourself some time to develop Veronica & Corolla correctly before even thinking of adding in a new character. Okay, but I need help. Well, I remember a long time ago you said Veronica would have a crush on Boulder. That might make for some interesting character development.

Basically, the key is to develop your characters so they don't feel like they're the same person with a different name. Notice how my characters all sound different. The way they talk, what they say... it all matters to develop them and build up their personality. Make sure your characters' personality shows through the dialogue. Okay. Perhaps next episode?

Ah. Soo... I might change Corolla and Veronica's dialogues so that they talk differently.