Thread:PeaVZ108/@comment-27480112-20190325134304/@comment-26888167-20190422044032

"The story was planned to be a collaborative story, but then JeloElducal decided it would be better off a solo story instead."

Why did this happen? I'm sure the story might be longer and not have this problem if it had been a collaborative story. Gee, it might've been finished months ago if you hadn't made it a solo story. Keep in mind your story is currently as long as the stories I write in one or two days, rewriting this one isn't that bad of an idea. There's almost nothing lost, since there's not much written. We could easily write more in a few days if we work together.