Thread:JeloElducal/@comment-27480112-20180331121535/@comment-26888167-20180401050513

JeloElducal wrote: JeloElducal wrote: Also, here's the icon ideas for the factors I'm reviewing.

What are your reactions? Great!
 * Solidity
 * 10 to 7 - a solid cube (Pretty solid plot!)
 * 6 to 4 - a slightly-melted cube (Kinda solid plot)
 * 3 to 0 - a puddle of liquid (Plot's not solid.)
 * Characters/Personality
 * 10 to 7 - a 3D person (Personalities are solid!)
 * 6 to 3 - a slighty-shaded 3d person (Personalities are kinda solid.)
 * 3 to 0 - a a flat person (Personalities are too flat)
 * Grammar
 * 10 to 7 - a golden notebook with lines of text (Great grammar!)
 * 6 to 3 - a white notebook with lines of text, but with big spacing (Decent grammar.)
 * 3 to 0 - a brown notebook with nothing but scribbled spirals (Your grammar sucks!)
 * Execution
 * 10 to 7 - a computer monitor with a thumbs up screen (Perfect story execution!)
 * 6 to 4- a computer monitor with a regular screen (Decent execution.)
 * 3 to 0 - a computer monitor with a BSOD  (Execution error.)

By the way, I want to join your story, Pea.