Thread:JeloElducal/@comment-26888167-20180927161106/@comment-8138569-20180929120329

Redfork2000 wrote: Chilly Bean BAM! wrote: Redfork2000 wrote: Think about it: Just like any other character, he needs to have his own motivations in order to take action. I'll give you an idea:

In Oscar Obsidian's first story, he was working for Shine Fabric. Why did he do that? Shine Fabric hired him. Therefore, we can conclude that Shine Fabric paid Oscar Obsidian to be her body guard for that story. You'll see this makes sense when you realize that she was even paying Bright Spark to help guard with some additional robots. OH UHHHHH

JACQUELINE WILL HIRE HIM

HAPPY NOW Finally.

You see why I'm doing this? You need to give each character a motivation. Villains are characters too, so they need their own motivations to be doing things as well. Otherwise they come across as random embodiments of evil that do evil things just beause they're evil, which is not how villains are supposed to work. k