Thread:PeaVZ108/@comment-8138569-20180524181754/@comment-30384301-20190517160901

So this story is basically about Corolla gaining new powers, before she saves Jewel from Jacqueline? That sounds like a typical "save the princess" story, but I guess it's okay.

I don't really see why Veronica needs to be around to help Corolla, especially since this story is all about Corolla. At this point, I think Richard would've trusted Corolla long enough to allow her to take on Jacqueline herself. I think it'll be far more interesting if the story solely focuses on one character to be the main hero, instead of having several characters bashing the villain at once, especially if Veronica isn't going to have a role different from Corolla anyway. Corolla's strong enough to take on Jacqueline, yes?