Thread:JeloElducal/@comment-8138569-20180129060924/@comment-8138569-20180130233644

Chilly Bean BAM! wrote: CreeperDNA wrote: No personality = hard to use.

Doesn't seem to stop 99% of this wikia's characters.

Tessa - A somewhat easygoing gal. She's also mostly intelligent as well.

That's not a personality. That's a loose framework for a personality, and the exact same thing you used to describe Jaiden. Pro tip: the number one thing to avoid is a one-sentence personality. If your character's personality can be described in a single sentence, like that, it's not a good character. Notice how Npegear, my personal favorite, has a complex personality that makes her more than a 2D cut-out. Ask yourself these questions:


 * What do they look like?
 * What are their motives?
 * What would they do in any given situation?
 * How would they act casually?
 * How would you act if you were them?
 * What is their mental state?
 * Why are they in The Rooms?
 * If you could describe them in one setence what would it be? (This may seem redundant but stay with me here)
 * Elaborate on each point in order to hopefully turn the sentence into a paragraph.
 * Put all of these points together and you've got yourself a character.

There are too much questions here.

You know what, fine! Let me get them all up soon.

Actually, I'll get Jelo (when he finally becomes active again) to do extra info about her like the 10 questions you asked me. Right now, Jelo isn't coming back and I don't know what's causing it.