Thread:JeloElducal/@comment-30384301-20181030122313/@comment-27480112-20181031013604

PeaVZ108 wrote: JeloElducal wrote: Pea, even I have a lot unfinished stories. I can see that, even I have a few stories unfinished. But I decided to drop the habit ever since I started writing HoEC with Fork.

Maybe I've exaggerated a little there, and maybe I'm missing out on a few details, but I still can't see in any way how Chilly improved from last time. Though his impatience is getting less of an issue from last year, and I can see that. He's young. Give him a chance...and a year or two for him to improve. Maybe rather than ranting about him, why not help him? Guide him so he can improve and make better stories...and make less characters.