Thread:JeloElducal/@comment-26888167-20181003131110/@comment-26888167-20181009121625

These lines are very boring. What's the point of this? And it just goes on and on for the entire scene. At least when my characters talk about being bored, I'll at least try to make it interesting somehow. But here this intro doesn't make me want to read the rest of the story. I mean seriously, right off the bat he's beginning with boring lines and bland personalities.
 * Blovy: I'm bored...
 * Richard: Why?
 * Blovy: Because I haven't done anything other than this so far. Actually, I'll go play a game.
 * Richard: Okay.