Thread:JeloElducal/@comment-26888167-20181003131110/@comment-30384301-20181009121114

Hey, Fork!

To be honest, I feel like Chilly is more interested in starting new stories that will most likely never be complete than actually developing the stories he has barely developed in.

This trait applies to characters too, since Chilly seems to be more interested in adding new bland and forgettable characters than actually developing his existing ones. Almost every story he has ever done introduces at least one new character, which ends up being uninteresting and...meh.

Speaking of stories, most of his edits on collaborated stories that he is involved in doesn't really contribute to the overall story progress at all. Just take a look on his first edit on a story that I plan to do with him so that Richard can get character development, The Ring's Curse. Yes, he's in charge of the intro:

''Richard's house. Richard and his friends are hanging out like most times.'' Blovy walks away.
 * Blovy: I'm bored...
 * Richard: Why?
 * Blovy: Because I haven't done anything other than this so far. Actually, I'll go play a game.
 * Richard: Okay.
 * Kernely: What can we do today?
 * Richard: Dunno, it could've been a stroll or something, but it's been done quite a few times, so no.
 * Kernely: 'Kay.
 * Corolla: Rick, I've been wondering about something.
 * Richard: What?
 * Corolla: I'm not really sure if I can have a sidekick. It could actually be a villain in disguise.
 * Richard: Okay, but you're pretty strong, so why worry? And if you'd have trouble, we'd come to help!
 * Corolla: You're right.
 * Pealy: *sigh* This is surly a boring day. Wonder if we can do something exciting.

If you ask me, the lines that Chilly's characters use is mostly bland. There really isn't any difference in their personalities (stereotypical heroes) once you read between the lines.