Thread:PeaVZ108/@comment-27480112-20190325134304/@comment-30384301-20190331142609

Your storywriting skills are actually pretty good, at least I can say it's better than Chilly's. That's how I'd say in brutal honesty. It's just the execution of your stories that you need to work on.

I don't want to make my answers to your second question sound redundant, so take a look at all the tips Fork and I have given you so far. In this thread, in other TRS threads and more.