Thread:JeloElducal/@comment-26888167-20180927161106/@comment-8138569-20180929124254

Redfork2000 wrote: No Chilly! Don't add in too many characters. Remember what I told you about adding unnecessary characters? You don't want them to be forgettable, do you?

Now here's my idea:

You said Jacqueline has a crush on Opposite Blast, right? Well, how about we scrap the hypnotic minion altogether and use a new plot? This time around, Jacqueline wants to impress Opposite Blast so that he will want to date her.

It all starts with Jacqueline seeing Opposite Blast and his team. She wants to get Opposite Blast's attention, but he barely even recognizes her presence. Therefore, Jacqueline believes that she must dfo something big so that Opposite Blast will notice her.

She first tries a high-scale attack in Echo Creek, only to fail miserably against Red Fork, who was happening to walk by at the moment.

Later she tries taking over Foodland, only to be defeated by Richard, his friends, and the Sprout Squad.

However, later hearing Opposite Blast talk with his team, she realizes that Opposite Blast isn't impressed with any of that. Listening to Opposite Blast and his team, she realizes that what Opposite Blast really wants is revenge on Dr. Zack. She then decides to attack Dr. Zack's base, which leads to her having to fight Dr. Zack's minions. At the end, she fails the attack, but Opposite Blast watches, and laughs a bit, before telling her that she shouldn't feel bad. She tells her that only the gang has ever defeated Dr. Zack, and even they've never been able to capture him.

Meanwhile, for comedy effects, we'll have Electra dislike Jacqueline and say she'll be watching her. THat's how she acts since she will realize that Jacqueline has a crush on Opposite Blast.

Another thing is that Oppostie Blast won't realize that Jacqueline has a crush on him.

So, what do you think? okay fine.