Thread:Redfork2000/@comment-30384301-20180925062435/@comment-26888167-20181008125246

I think it was pretty good, despite being a bit short. It was quite original to be honest, since I think never before has a villain fooled the gang into doing the dirty work for him.

I think this story is also beginning to show some possible "anti-development" for Red Ruby. By this I don't mean he's getting poorly developed. By this I mean that he's getting developed in the opposite direction of most characters. You see, most characters get developed into being better people. Heroes learn lessons, and villains get redeemed and turn into heroes. However, the development Red is getting seems to imply that he's not really happy anymore as a part of the gang. Were he to become an anti-hero or something, it's obviously not confirmed, but I think we could definitely work something out of this. He's already one of the members of the gang that gets angry at everyone that messes with him, whether it's hero or villain, so him slowly turning away from the gang wouldn't be out of the question, at least the way it looks from this story. That's still your decision though, but I thought it would be a good thing to let you know.

And in case you worried if Storm Cloud wasn't being threatening enough, believe me that the fact that he used the gang to his advantage already established him as a big threat. He's still in the game of the most dangerous villains around.

Overall, very good story. 8 out of 10, I would say.