Thread:JeloElducal/@comment-30384301-20181124030702/@comment-26888167-20181124033941

Chilly Bean BAM! wrote: Redfork2000 wrote: Chilly Bean BAM! wrote: Ah.

Anyways, a new character, but something's different about this one.

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A goat. Named Sammy. What's the point of this? Your main characters need to be develop. Focus on Richard, Kernely, and all the other characters whose names I can't remember right now. It's much better than tossing in a random goat that will be forgotten as fast as your other dozens of new characters. Okay, fine! *throws the goat in the boat*

Seriously, I need development, but I can't come up with anything. Can you all help me? Of course we can, but that's not the point. Chilly, you need to learn to develop your characters without help. If I always solve your storywriting problems, you wouldn't learn how to do it yourself, now would you?