Thread:PeaVZ108/@comment-8138569-20180524181754/@comment-30384301-20181016134056

In the meantime, I'm going to remove the intro you did for The Ring's Curse. Clearly, you didn't follow my instructions on how the intro should go.

Here's how the intro for that story should go again:

Richard and his friends get bored, before Richard decides to pass time by showing his friends some new tricks he has picked up with the help of the Winter Ring. Richard's friends, having seen those tricks before, get bored out. Richard then gets the idea of showing these tricks to his other friends (Green Shadow, Starcade, Kyoji, etc.), to which his friends agree, eager to watch the reactions of Green Shadow and the others. Richard and his friends proceed to go to Green Shadow's estate.