Thread:PeaVZ108/@comment-27480112-20190325134304/@comment-26888167-20190422043732

To be honest, I don't know who Blanc is. Through research I found out she's a female, and apparently a CPU like Neptune, right?

I'm not exactly sure how powerful Neptune is, or how powerful Blanc is compared to her, so I really don't know how powerful Blanc should be. I think Bolt might know. He has Neptune and Nepgear. Either way, I don't think any of them is OP enough to bring down someone like Red Fork, let alone someone like XJ-9.

Here's what I recommend:

1 - Don't have her defeat XJ-9. First investigate more about Blanc's power, if necessary ask Bolt for help. I don't think Blanc should be able to defeat XJ-9 unless there's a villain helping her, or if she collected something that would make her more powerful, like a black crystal Captain Dark Shell left behind, or some powerful energy source. That's the only explanation there could be to her being too OP.

2 - Have your characters join together and perform team combos. That always helps against the more powerful characters.

3 - You can always have Red Fork come in at the last hour, and turn into Sun Fork to clean up the whole mess if you want. Though that might make for a pretty cheap ending.

By the way, I just noticed your story is incredibly small. I thought that with several months of writing this story, you'd have a very long story by now. But I don't see where the months of effort have gone. The story is way too short.