User:BF10/Reviews

Welcome to my reviews on these stories!

Scoring
Here's how scoring will work... Then the final 50 points will be divided by 5 and then be rounded up or down as normal.
 * Phase 1:
 * Plagiarism: Firstly, I need to know if this story seems to be a copy and paste of some other work with other characters slapped on it. If it is original, it will proceed to the next phase, otherwise the story will instantly score a 0/10 or 1/10 without having to continue to the further phases. No matter how good you otherwise make your story, if it seems too similar to another work, such as something from SML or SMG4 or some TV show not known to many, the story's journey for a better rating will come to a premature stop.
 * Phase 2:
 * Grammar: If it has acceptable grammar and is readable, this will pass with 10 points. Otherwise the story will lose points for grammar errors, such as "In de land of Echo KreeK".
 * Character development: To earn up to 10 points, don't make your characters have no meaning or just flat that I could replace it with some other random character and it will pan out. Also, try to avoid repeating the same characters too many times as it lowers the creativity provided (it's okay to add your main character to all stories but don't make it too reliant on them). Mean-spirited characters, whether they are the main antagonist or not will also pull the points down.
 * Plot: Try to make an original and creative plot to gain 10 points. Also, please make your stories pace fast enough and have no plotholes nor filler. You do not need filler to make a long story look interesting, it just makes it more boring to read.
 * Humor: You don't have to go as hard as the humor in Ed Edd n Eddy or pre-movie SpongeBob. Add some stuff to be funny and you'll get 5 points. Exceptions are if it is a serious story.
 * Action: Pack a lot of action to gain 5 points as well. Don't force it in!
 * Focus: 10 points will be provided if the plot remains focused and it doesn't have a misleading title. Having the title "The Fall of Dave" but have it be mostly of his friend Chris fighting enemies to fill up the story until the ending is not only not focused, but could also seriously hurt the plot grade.


 * Total outcomes:
 * Absolutely bad stories so bad that really they should've not passed the drawing board. Often unoriginal, uncreative, mean-spirited or plain, and really doesn't feel like it could've been executed correctly anyways. Copy and pastes with other characters slapped on it will also almost guarantee this rating. This rating is otherwise rare to get.
 * Pretty bad story, avoid reading this if you need to save time. Often unoriginal, drags on too long and is boring, contains lots of filler, and has wasted potential. This rating is rare to get.
 * A little bit better but still bad, containing lots of filler to pace the story and being slow.
 * Poor stories that has little character development, has a boring feel, and has little action.
 * Mediocre stories that might be appealing to a few people but could've done more better potential.
 * Stories that are just in the middle. Contains some creativity and character development but on the other hand might be boring or have lots of filler.
 * Decent stories that are pretty good but still has some issues that prevents it from being great.
 * Good stories that have very little filler, has character development, and is packed with action.
 * Great stories that has nearly no flaws and is readable.
 * Only for stories with a lot of effort taken into it, they often depict of no grammar errors, lots of action, and is fast paced. This rating is rare to get.
 * Very rare rating to get. Requires an amazing effort taken in that ensures the story is moving quickly and having absolutely no filler and being completely original.

Reviews
Note: They will go in order from oldest completed to newest completed. Incomplete stories will never be reviewed.