Thread:JeloElducal/@comment-26888167-20180920145732/@comment-26888167-20180927151612

You're right Pea. THough I think the problem itself is different.

With ATG the problem was that the story was overextended with a pointless filler when it should've ended. In this case, the problem is that apparently, Jelo doesn't have a clear plotline for us to follow. Even slice of life stories like this one need at least a basic plotline in order to work properly.