Talk:Stories: The Battle Tournament/@comment-27480112-20180627215225/@comment-26888167-20180628141521

TO be honest, I only removed one line from Jelo. It was a line that contained an off-topic question (By the way, should Jelo be in the spectator zone). As I've said before, do not include these questions in the story. Ask them in a thread. You won't imagine how long it could me to realize that question was there. Pea and I had continued the story, and I never noticed the question until much later. Please, do not ask questions about the story in the story. It's not an effective way to do so. If you have any questions, please ask them in the TRS thread, or alternatively, ask them in a special TRS thread with whoever is the main writer of the story in question.