Talk:Stories: The Super Powered Expansion/@comment-8138569-20180828131655/@comment-26888167-20180828133033

The story is pretty large, so I've extracted the scene where Max shows up:

''The Locked Room Gang travels to Russia to find Dr. Sanders base and stop him. Meanwhile, Alice is in her bedroom, crying. Her younger brother Max peaks into the bedroom.'' Max exits the bedroom, and sees Tommy coming towards the bedroom. Tommy tries to get into Alice's bedroom, but Max quickly grabs Tommy and tosses him against the wall.
 * Max: What's going on now?
 * Alice: Nothing. I just had a bad day, that's all...
 * Max: Let me guess, you got an A- instead of a A+?
 * Alice: Just go away Max. I want to be alone.
 * Max: If you say so.
 * Max: What's up, Tommy?
 * Tommy: I'm looking for Alice. Where is she?
 * Max: She's in her bedroom. She said she wants to be alone.
 * Tommy: Thanks. *walks towards the bedroom*
 * Max: Hey, what part of "be alone" did you not understand?
 * Tommy: Sorry Max, but Alice needs a friend more than ever!
 * Max: Sorry, but she sais she wants to be alone, and I'm going to make sure you don't get in that room!
 * Tommy: Max, I'm older and stronger than you. I'm 15, and you're only 12. Fighting isn't an option.
 * Tommy: Ouch... How did you do that?
 * Max: You're not getting near Alice's room.
 * Tommy: Aw, come on! Why did you have to choose today to be a good brother?
 * Max: Because Alice said she'd give me candy if I'm a good brother to her.
 * Tommy: Hm... candy?
 * Max: Yes, candy.
 * Tommy: Well, I can give you all the candy you want if you let me pass.
 * Max: How much candy are we talking about, exactly?
 * Tommy: Hm... how about two pounds of candy?
 * Max: Twenty pounds.
 * Tommy: How about four pounds?
 * Max: Fifteen pounds.
 * Tommy: Six pounds?
 * Max: Ten pounds is my final offer. Take it or lose it.
 * Tommy: Ok, it's a deal...
 * Max: Yay! Give me the candy!
 * Tommy: It's at my house. Go and take it.
 * Max: Got it! *rushes to Tommy's house*