Thread:Redfork2000/@comment-31727837-20180929122335/@comment-26888167-20181112053127

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So, in season 6, Alan manages to get control of what's left of the tech from Dr. Zack's creditors, and therefore becomes the main threat for the season, right? Sounds good. After all, Dr. Zack & his creditors will be out of the map after the season 5 finale, so it fits with the timeline.

There are no two-part season finales in HoEC. Instead, what we do is make the last episode of the season be much longer than the regular episodes.

There is no such ancient parasite in Equestria, so we'll have to scrap that idea. Sorry.

The gang having that kind of breakdown? Nope, doesn't sound right. The only time that ever happened was because of Discord's magic corrupting them. And even he didn't make that much damage.

Some of the other features in your idea were pretty good, and I think this could work, but we'd have to make several arrangements to the story to make it work. Remove the ancient parasite thing, and try changing the gang corruption part. Unless there's some kind of magic or mind control involved, the gang having such a breakdown into corruption doesn't sound right.

However, I have an idea that might turn the tables and help fix things. Get Discord involved! With all the research Alan has done, he's bound to know just how powerful Discord is. Being the most powerful character to ever appear in HoEC, he'd make the perfect ally for Alan, if he finds out how to convince Discord to help him out. Discord could easily corrupt the Mane Six and the gang for Alan. Perhaps Alan could offer Discord to give him freedom to use his powers in any way he wants, as long as he helps Alan with his plan. Discord would be doing his magic behind the scenes, so the gang doesn't know that he's helping Alan.

Now, Discord is too powerful to get enslaved by Alan, but as I said, with the proper negotiations, Alan could get himself a powerful ally. Of course, once the Elements of Harmony are restored, Discord will be turned to stone again.