Review:Substitute Nightmare

Plot
DJ Octavio: DJ OCTAVIO IN THE HOUSE!

Instantly best teacher 10/10

Jelo: Wait, wait, wait, '''WHAT?! '''I-I gotta go take a rest... (leaves to the faculty office) me irl

And if Jelo is there what's the point of substitute?

Kenny: (I just cr*pped my pants!)

Unnecessary swear count: 1

Also who says this out loud

Kenny: (Oh god, what the f-

Unnecessary swear count: 2

Kenny: (F*ck!)

Unnecessary swear count: 3

Pro tip: Having two '???'s at the same time makes for severe confusion. It was extremely hard to follow which was which.

Jenny: Yay! I love mythology!



Paper: Alright, but class is in like 15 sec-

The bell rung..

That wasn't even 10 minutes, let alone an hour.

Jaiden: Your writing is illegible!



Dr. Zomboss: Why would people here be friends with you?

Jelo holds a sign saying "Don't worry, I'll help you!"

If the principal didn't hire them, why not tell them?

If the principal did hire them, Jelo can't do crap because he's under the principal's jurisdiction too.

The next conversation goes like this:

Ib: who are you ???: idk Jenny: who are you ???: idfk

Then the Parasite popped out in Jenny's brain

Come on man you were doing so well grammar-wise

*walks to Nebula's desck, who is also nauseous*

Well I guess spelling's gone too

Principal: Wait.....(searches on Galaximus, Zomboss, and HIM) By golly, you are right!

What kind of principal hires anyone without checking their background? It's literally law to do so.

''Dr. Zomboss quickly hides to a empty girls restroom



Wait, someone's walking down the hallway. It's Weird Al Yankovic

And then it kinda ends. Some of you must be thinking: why did it end?

....

There's no answer, I just thought you'd be thinking that.

It doesn't have the finished template on it and therefore isn't finished but it hasn't been worked on in nearly half a year so yeah.

The plot was pretty good, with some randomness and stretching the suspension of belief too far. 2/3.

Grammar
It was good until two thirds of the way through, where it took a huge drop. 2/3.

Originality
NORMALLY HEROES BUT NOW SCHOOL STUDENTS?!?!?! AND THEIR SUBSTITUTES ARE EVIL?!?!?

In case you didn't get the hint, there is no originality, though the conversations between teacher and students are pretty solid. 1/3

Verdict
An overused premise riddled with overused tropes under the pretence it was original.

5.5/10 -