Thread:JeloElducal/@comment-31727837-20180814221651/@comment-26888167-20180818144233

That was my plan the entire time. In fact, I think I have an entire new idea for the plot of the story, which could focus a bit more on this idea.

Jaiden goes to train with Blast. However, Tommy then notices Ari. Ari does his usual noises, and Tommy decides to take him to take care of him while Jaiden and Blast are away training. Ari then decides to play a trick on Tommy. He pretends to be sick, making Tommy worry, and decide to take Ari to his house to take care of him. Tommy tries all kind of things, but Ari doesn't seem to get any better.

Blast then arrives at Tommy's house, and freaks outs when he realizes that Tommy took Ari without Jaiden's permission. Tommy says he only wanted to help Ari to get better, but Blast tells Tommy that Jaiden could get mad if she figures out that he's taken Ari. Meanwhile, Jaiden discovers that Ari is missing, and she tells CypherDen and Rebecca to help her search for Ari. CypherDen and Rebecca arrive at Tommy's house, and nervously, Blast and Tommy pretend that nothing is going on. Blast then says he'll help Tommy with Ari so that he gets better, but in the process, Ari escapes the house, causing Blast and Tommy to have to chase him all around Echo Creek, while the classic Benny Hill theme plays.

Finally, Blast and Tommy find Ari on the top of a statue. Tommy tries to get Ari down, saying how worried he is about Ari getting worse. Jaiden and her friends then arrive, and see what's going on. Ari then pretends to faint, causing Tommy to freak out even more, and cry thinking that it's all his fault. Jaiden, however, reads this prank immediately and tells Ari to stop acting. Ari then flies back to Jaiden. Tommy then tells Jaiden the truth about how he thought Ari was sick, and took him to his house to take care of him. Jaiden explains that Ari must have taken advantage of the opportunity to play around with Tommy, and tells him that she appreciates that Tommy had good intentions, but that next time, he should ask first.

So, basically, that's my new idea for the plot. Tell me what you think.