Thread:PeaVZ108/@comment-27480112-20190325134304/@comment-26888167-20190509113800

Look, I don't expect him to be perfect, nor to write like an experienced storywriter, such as myself. It takes time and practice to master storywriting. In fact, even I have lots to improve on as well.

What I do expect from Chilly is to listen to our advice, and slowly improve his storywriting. Look at Pea for example. He listened to my advice, and put it in practice, and therefore, he has grown as a writer. If Chilly would listen to our advice and actually apply it in his writing, he'd grow as a writer too.