Thread:Redfork2000/@comment-30384301-20180707030921/@comment-26888167-20180916035003

Well, I've got to admit, this turn in the story is great! It's most likely my favorite part so far.

Also, in addition to the other stories I mentioned, I have one more idea for a future story. It would follow the arc of the Gala at Marble Mansion from the Ticket Master.

-Dress for Success: The Gala at Marble Mansion is only in a couple of weeks. While the guys are buying their suits for the gala, the girls are wondering where they can get a dress for the gala. Lemon Glass then mentions that Rarity is a very talented fashion designer, and makes wonderful dresses. So the girls go to visit Rarity for her to make dresses for them. Rarity has an idea. You see, in a few days, Rarity was going to have a fashion show, and she offers the girls that she'll make their dresses for free, and they can model those dresses for the fashion show. The girls are excited about it, and Rarity begins working.

Once the dresses are ready, Rarity shows them to the girls. THe dresses are pretty elegant and fashionable, but they aren't exactly what the girls had in mind. They tell Rarity that it's not what they had in mind, and Rarity decides to remake them to their taste. They tell her she doesn't have to, considering how generous she's been making the dresses for free, but Rarity insists in making sure they're completely satisfied.

Then occurs a montage where Rarity is remaking the dresses, and each of the girls in telling her how they want their dresses. Turns out, their ideas aren't really good, but Rarity does they want anyway. At the end, the girls love the new dresses, but they don't really look good. When the fashion show comes, Rarity is nervous, and when the girls go to the stage to model the dresses, the audience doesn't like the dresses at all, saying they look silly, and saying how Rarity's dresses are terrible. This makes Rarity fall into depression, and close herself in her room for days. The girls realize that their ideas for the dresses were actually pretty silly after all, and that they shouldn't have been so picky with the dresses Rarity had made for them originally.

They decide to use Rarity's old designs to remake the dresses, and organize another fashion show. They then apologize to Rarity for what happened, and tell her that they've organized another fashion show, but that this time, they'll be using Rarity's dresses. It ends up being a complete success, and it's a win-win situation: Rarity gets lots of orders for dresses, and the girls have the dresses they need for the Gala of Marble Mansion.

Although the entire story is centered around the girls, some of the male characters will show up briefly during some parts of the story.

What do you think?