Thread:Redfork2000/@comment-30384301-20180707030921/@comment-26888167-20180924135632

The part with the maze sounds incredibly similar to the labrynth in Discord Disaster, to be honest.

Furthermore, now that I think of it, it doesn't reall ymake much sense for Blue Ocean to be one of the only two who didn't fall for the illusions. I'd say Alice would probably be a better option. I'd say Red Fork, but his power level might ruin the plor if he were to take that role. You see, although Blue Ocean is smart in terms of science, he isn't actually much smarter than average in other areas. That's why Red Fork seems to outsmart him in other areas that aren't science. Alice might be a better choice to be one of the two who don't fall for the illusions.

One more thing: in order for the plot to work, I believe the rest of the gang should remain inactive for much longer. Kyoji himself is pretty powerful, and if we add in more characters like Red Fork and Akasha, Dark Starcade won't stand a chance against the gang. So my idea would be to perhaps have them be freed, but be weakened for some reason, rendering most of them unable to fight. That way only certain characters, such as Blast, Tommy, Takeshi and Sasuke to fight. We should leave the more powerful characters such as Red Fork and Akasha unable to fight after being freed, as well as perhaps some side characters as well. I believe that focusing on only a small part of the gang, we might get a better developed story overall.