Thread:PeaVZ108/@comment-30384301-20180210012401/@comment-27480112-20180211011209

CaptainRustbolt21 wrote: Not the best, but it’s pretty good. Oh and that next edit? Plus, it’s almost complete, so once I declare it complete, you can finally catch a break.

I was thinking of a part in where Star, Jelo and Marco witness the events through the portal, and Jelo hopes he doens't turn against his friends ever. But, I figured out it might ruin the story, so I scrapped it.