Thread:PeaVZ108/@comment-8138569-20180524181754/@comment-30384301-20190320142844

I'm not talking about the dialogue between Corolla and Melody, even though I think it's improved from before.

Not good enough. You'll have to keep editing until either Fork or I know what to do next. How we would know when we should edit is when you and/or your edits tell us what our characters should do next.