Thread:Redfork2000/@comment-8138569-20180831141006/@comment-8138569-20181222014400

I meant...I now realized that you have the same problem.

Oh, and after struggling through, I finally managed to barge into the thread where you posted that information!

''For example, if you had a story where Kernely wanted to learn to play the violin, but she struggles in the process, perhaps even having an antagonist rival character telling her something like: "You'll never learn how to play the violin." Kernely struggles, and reaches a point where she's so frustrated that she gives up the violin as a whole. However, in the darkest moment of her frustration, she looks at something she wrote as a little child: "When I grow up, I want to be a great violin player, and play the violin on a stage, with hundreds of people enjoying my music." She suddenly gets flashbacks to how much she wanted to learn to play the violin as a child, and why it was so important to her. She realizes that all this time she's been focused on proving that antagonist character how wrong they are, instead of focusing on herself and her dream. So she decides to go back to learning how to play the violin, and after several weeks of hard work, she gets very good at it, and even decides to do a presentation in front of a large crowd in Foodland. She then sees everyone clapping and cheering for her, just like in her flashback.''

''If you made a story like this, then Kernely would've gotten a good dose of character development. And by the way, in this example, playing the violin isn't even the most important of the character development. No, the most important part is Kernely's cahracter and personality. She learns to work hard for her goals, even when others are telling her she can't do it. She also learns to not focus on what negative people say, and instead focus on enjoying the progress. And that my friend, is some really good character development.''