Review:Battle Royale

Are story begins with Kirby

Come on man not even a word in and already a spelling error?

Toad: Because he killed the Princess!... Then she respawned!
 * 1) Shouldn't he be in jail?
 * 2) How does one respawn from death

Kirby: Fluff what did you do?!

Oh hey are we gonna see a cool story from this?

(Tells Kirby the entire Inter-Dimensional story)

O-oh

Bandanna Dee: WOO! Give me a chicken teriyaki club please!

Yes very funny but one must wonder how you mistake clearly visible golf clubs in a golf party for chicken wings just by the same word.



I stand corrected.

who in the Northern Hemisphere

What about the Southern Hemisphere? Dirty Southern-Hemisphereist.

Begin Tragety

I'm not even going to say anything this line speaks for itself.

Kirby: Don't ask how I have pockets on my skin, I just do.



Fluff: THAT'S MR. DR. PRINCE FLUFF, TO YOU SIR!!!

THAT'S NOT HOW TITLES WORK, TO YOU SIR

Luigi: *colbert emoji* >using emojis in writing 😤😡😡😓😓😓😓

Kirby: (Makes a face that looks like this "I:I")

''(Makes a face that looks like this ಠ_ಠ)

Pro tip: Don't use emoji in any writing. Ever. Don't.

(Puts Fluff in a straight jacket), and now (Puts Peach in a straight-jacket, and tosses both of them into a room, and then locks it)

Oh are we playing Saw again?

(Sees a Gold-Fish)



Fluff pulls out a gun, and then proceeds to shoot Peach in the leg.



MEEEEEDDDDDIIIICCCCCC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



LET'S SETTLE THIS THE REAL WAY! ''*Pulls a smash ball out of Kirby's "pocket"*



So. Plot? None. I had no idea what was going on. There were some funny moments though, so the score goes up from that and we're left with a 1.5/3

Grammar
The spelling was on point but there is no punctuation so 1/3

Originality
A completely original story with an original conflict and plot. Save for the work-together-to-solve the problem trope, this work was mainly trope-free. 2.5/3

Verdict
Well, the story wasn't the greatest but it's original and whoever wrote it obviously put a lot of effort into it.

6/10 - 😀😄😄😁